well dstates maybe we wanna cuss
cmon man why dont you join us?
its about my 4th rap here
and god it took me a good ol' beer
and i know im probaly gonna get yelled at after this post
but im like the west coast
here i go again sounding scared
but hey like anybody cared
the profanity you guys spit is uncalled for.
those types of rhymes are meaningless, as i have said before.
they're pointles, and waste space, it's just an eyesore.
so i made my 2nd appearance just to settle the score.
and i might shut a few of you out while i take the floor.
NO harm dudes...just put some MEANING in your lyrics.
you gotta go with the flow and roll like the classics.
and dont patronize me by posting these gimmicks.
cuz if you do, i will be one of your toughist critics.
and once you get me going i get hot like the tropics.
Spit it at ME, once you find some real style.
from now on i want your raps to be worthwhile.
that does NOT mean seeing all the different swear words you can compile to defile the name of rap
i really get tired of seeing all that sensless crap.
but i've made this one a bit too long.
it just goes to show that this feeling is strong.
and maybe im wrong, maybe im the one that don't belong.
who knows, we'll just wait till thos other chaps post up-in-here.
but until then homies imma dis-a-ppear --peace
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[Edited by dstates, 3/11/2007 8:23:16 PM]
ok was that even a rap?
Of course not. Anyone can see that.
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