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    DarthWright posted on Mar 11, 2007 8:37:35 PM - Report post
     
    remember pal im with u........ and next thing i need is a yell from neo or somebody so i wont participate..... plus its late... good night
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    Darkish posted on Mar 11, 2007 8:37:36 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by DarthWright

    ok DR no offense but you dont sound free
    after that rap i had to pee
    id hate to live your life
    id hate it even more if you had a wife
    so remember no offense
    but i guess now im gonna have to do some self defense.....

    Hence the simple word 'pointless'
    Like dstates said they are all pointless
    There are no meaning to the words
    Just as useful as my turds

    I wish today that there was something
    But not just these raps you see here
    A lot of songs today are nothing
    It seems as though they are written over beers

    /--\
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    Shibby posted on Mar 11, 2007 9:34:20 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by DarthWright

    ok DR no offense but you dont sound free
    after that rap i had to pee
    id hate to live your life
    id hate it even more if you had a wife
    so remember no offense
    but i guess now im gonna have to do some self defense.....

    One thing I'd like to point out, for your benefit and future raps you write, is line no. 2 in that rap.
    It has no purpose
    It doesn't fit into the rest of what you're saying, it just rhymes.
    It's little things like this that make all the difference.

    Shibby __/--

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    Chingy42007 posted on Mar 12, 2007 6:47:27 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by potato_chips

    lmao, i felt nothing but amusement after reading the supposed "pwnage"
    seriously, do you even read your stuff Chingy?
    I'm justing pointing out it lacks structure and originality.
    I've heard the same words come out of a hundred different people. It sounds empty.
    besides, i don't hate, its bad for you.



    nice one dstates

    well i do try. But maybe if i put more effort in....

    And besides, it was all about trying to get the message across. Wasn't meant to be moving, or extremely world-class standard rapping. And the pwnage bit was for entertainment purposes only. Maybe im not as dumb as i may seem. So don't underestimate me.

     
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    Pichu_OT posted on Mar 12, 2007 7:07:28 AM - Report post
     
    I thought I stuck it to u all once, now I'm tired,
    I can't say out-of-pocket ****, cause as a mod, I'll be fired,
    Pichu reps hard as hell on his wrestlin' site,
    A bouted bouted bouted h*e, now I'm ready to fight.
    Ain't no member on this site ever worth the praise,
    My raps go on and on and on like I'm lost in a maze.
    I guess a lot of people hate me, cause I'm real conceited,
    I honestly really don't give a damn, if I had a na-na, u could eat it.
    I'm very sorry, truly, really if I offended anybody,
    I hope I don't have to hold ur hand and take u straight to the pody.
    This is the hardcore world, ain't nothin' given here free
    U got to work fo' ur cash and do it big like me,
    I betch u all sittin' dumb, like damn Pichu, WOW! Whoa!
    I promise I'll explain it all later, but right now I gotta go.

    --Pichu


    [Edited by Pichu_OT, 3/12/2007 7:32:03 AM]

    [Edited by Moderator Neo7, 3/14/2007 6:50:38 PM]
     
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    Chingy42007 posted on Mar 12, 2007 11:14:03 AM - Report post
     
    nice pichu. Flawless.
     
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    dstates posted on Mar 12, 2007 2:23:26 PM - Report post
     
    im reading these raps thrown by moderator PICHU
    and i gotta say, i got some respect for that DUDE.

    these new cats in hear, acting like they can BURN.
    but from watchin us they know they got a few things to LEARN.

    if you newbies wanna get it, go ahead, we'll start this FUED.
    sorry if im RUDE, but i must INCLUDE,
    that i DELUDE you and INTRUDE you til' you come UNGLUED.
    what do you do? now you're SCREWED
    maybe you think that im bein too CRUDE.
    but don't worry, this is just a PRELUDE.
    you havn't gotten a taste of me when im fully BREWED
    just lettin you know that a warning's been ISSUED
    and if you do face me you will be SUBDUED

    but maybe im wrong.maybe it's not my CONCERN.
    maybe my slyle of rap is not exactly MODERN,
    who's style is truely better, that's for you to DISCERN.
    but i wont accept new styles, im too damn STUBBORN
    and the way i throw, you notice a PATTERN.
    i make you eat your words so fast, it'll give you HEARTBURN.
    you can't fake respect, it's something you gotta EARN.
    so now i've told you my side, but now it's your TURN.
    cuz now this rap's dead, keep it real, til' i RETURN --peace

    DDDD
    DDDDD
    DDDDD[-STATES-] (btw: the pattern for this one is 2,2,9,9)
    DDDDD
    DDDD

    [Edited by dstates, 3/12/2007 3:24:45 PM]

    [Edited by dstates, 3/12/2007 3:26:51 PM]
    ❝/--\❞
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    zorrodude posted on Mar 12, 2007 4:15:16 PM - Report post
     
    Well well well, look what we got here,
    there are some ppl who started to smoke and drink beer.
    Funny how these raps are starting to look like poems,
    real rappers don't just stand there stiff like lawn gnomes.
    I don't usually rap with lines these long,
    imagine being dstates when he started smokin the bong.
    It prolly took him hours to read each line,
    instead of smoking weed, try drinking moonshine.
    Your mind will react faster, but with the same effect,
    you'll still feel relaxed, and feel perfect.
    That last part didn't seem to go with the flow,
    but eh, who cares anymo'
    Depending on how you said it, it will sound just fine,
    heck i should just throw in a pick-up line.
    But i'm not that good, i don't have enough skill,
    not even if i started poppin pills.

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