Hence the simple word 'pointless'
Like dstates said they are all pointless
There are no meaning to the words
Just as useful as my turds
I wish today that there was something
But not just these raps you see here
A lot of songs today are nothing
It seems as though they are written over beers
One thing I'd like to point out, for your benefit and future raps you write, is line no. 2 in that rap.
It has no purpose
It doesn't fit into the rest of what you're saying, it just rhymes.
It's little things like this that make all the difference.
well i do try. But maybe if i put more effort in....
And besides, it was all about trying to get the message across. Wasn't meant to be moving, or extremely world-class standard rapping. And the pwnage bit was for entertainment purposes only. Maybe im not as dumb as i may seem. So don't underestimate me.
I can't say out-of-pocket ****, cause as a mod, I'll be fired,
Pichu reps hard as hell on his wrestlin' site,
A bouted bouted bouted h*e, now I'm ready to fight.
Ain't no member on this site ever worth the praise,
My raps go on and on and on like I'm lost in a maze.
I guess a lot of people hate me, cause I'm real conceited,
I honestly really don't give a damn, if I had a na-na, u could eat it.
I'm very sorry, truly, really if I offended anybody,
I hope I don't have to hold ur hand and take u straight to the pody.
This is the hardcore world, ain't nothin' given here free
U got to work fo' ur cash and do it big like me,
I betch u all sittin' dumb, like damn Pichu, WOW! Whoa!
I promise I'll explain it all later, but right now I gotta go.
[Edited by Pichu_OT, 3/12/2007 7:32:03 AM]
[Edited by Moderator Neo7, 3/14/2007 6:50:38 PM]
and i gotta say, i got some respect for that DUDE.
these new cats in hear, acting like they can BURN.
but from watchin us they know they got a few things to LEARN.
if you newbies wanna get it, go ahead, we'll start this FUED.
sorry if im RUDE, but i must INCLUDE,
that i DELUDE you and INTRUDE you til' you come UNGLUED.
what do you do? now you're SCREWED
maybe you think that im bein too CRUDE.
but don't worry, this is just a PRELUDE.
you havn't gotten a taste of me when im fully BREWED
just lettin you know that a warning's been ISSUED
and if you do face me you will be SUBDUED
but maybe im wrong.maybe it's not my CONCERN.
maybe my slyle of rap is not exactly MODERN,
who's style is truely better, that's for you to DISCERN.
but i wont accept new styles, im too damn STUBBORN
and the way i throw, you notice a PATTERN.
i make you eat your words so fast, it'll give you HEARTBURN.
you can't fake respect, it's something you gotta EARN.
so now i've told you my side, but now it's your TURN.
cuz now this rap's dead, keep it real, til' i RETURN --peace
DDDDD[-STATES-] (btw: the pattern for this one is 2,2,9,9)
[Edited by dstates, 3/12/2007 3:24:45 PM]
[Edited by dstates, 3/12/2007 3:26:51 PM]
there are some ppl who started to smoke and drink beer.
Funny how these raps are starting to look like poems,
real rappers don't just stand there stiff like lawn gnomes.
I don't usually rap with lines these long,
imagine being dstates when he started smokin the bong.
It prolly took him hours to read each line,
instead of smoking weed, try drinking moonshine.
Your mind will react faster, but with the same effect,
you'll still feel relaxed, and feel perfect.
That last part didn't seem to go with the flow,
but eh, who cares anymo'
Depending on how you said it, it will sound just fine,
heck i should just throw in a pick-up line.
But i'm not that good, i don't have enough skill,
not even if i started poppin pills.
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