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potato chips got nothin but hate
he spittin it all out there, he just does not wait,
he does not think, he just does not know
wat he does, he just player-hates!
He just cant appreciate good talent when its near
"8 inches or miles, it really aint here"
he livin by the line he implies
But all he knows is, that, he lives by a lie
Its thrown in his face, he still blind as a bat
yet he does seem to notice a "repeat yourself" trap
"a brick wall could beat you, so could a clown"
but how would you know that, when you're already down?
swift rabbit punches just dont do the trick
verbal assaults will do - u use stones and sticks
what you think will draw up a crowd
will in fact will get you punched around
"i doubt you can rhyme about a slice of toast"
well, i just rhymed about you, for the most
I rhymed about you, i dissed about you
quoted, rejected, and tossed about you!!

And that, ladies and gentlemen, is the art of PWNAGE!

Hey you you sitting in the back,
come up front so you can give me a smack,
it turns me on when you smack me in the face,
it turns me on when you hit me with a mace,
so when your ready,
feel free to come up,
and beat me up.

lol nice. Kinda against yourself though ...

yo i just got up
and i aint in no mood for nice pups
why am i even saying this stuff
wen im not even that buff
yo wen kog gets a smack
ill be behind his back
i just got something smacked across my leg
and im suprised i didnt beg
but its all cool
if your a crazy cracked fool

yo wut up its dstates, i know you aint seen me here before,
but i came to back up shibby, and im asking for an encore.
cuz these posers make their meaningless rhymes for us to ignore.
they try to spit lyrics that they think are hardcore,
but we old school members will bring the downpour.
i believe it is true rap we need to restore.
not all these newbies coming in here swearing
it's my first time on this topic so this may seem a little daring.
but imma call out all you fakes and bring you into the light.
(there's something you newbies need to understand)
we call it a battle, that does't mean its a fight.
so stop filling all your lyrics with such anger.
i feel the new rap styles put music in danger.

put some meaning in your lyrics
so we understand when we hear-it
that you're trying to send a message
so then we can respect-it.

for what it's really worth.
don't claim to own this turf.

cuz until you understand.
how to make the mind expand.

just by making a simple rhyme.
then stop wasting my time.

[Edited by dstates, 3/11/2007 6:01:02 PM]

And an excellent example of what Dstates was talking about would be two posts up.

Ramen sounds good right about now...yum.

well dstates maybe we wanna cuss
cmon man why dont you join us?
its about my 4th rap here
and god it took me a good ol' beer
and i know im probaly gonna get yelled at after this post
but im like the west coast
here i go again sounding scared
but hey like anybody cared

lmao, i felt nothing but amusement after reading the supposed "pwnage"
seriously, do you even read your stuff Chingy?
I'm justing pointing out it lacks structure and originality.
I've heard the same words come out of a hundred different people. It sounds empty.
besides, i don't hate, its bad for you.



nice one dstates