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Elite  posted on Jun 16, 2008 3:54:31 PM - Report post

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Seeing how no one will post in my blog heres why I did.

An endless void of despair
I thought I would forever drift endlessly
Then I gazed into your eyes
I knew then where my destiny lies
For your beauty shall hold me till the end of time
Entranced by you I felt the world melt away and then we were all but one
Then as I dared to close my eyes
I saw that you were gone
Then the shadows swept upon me
The world was so dark with out your light
Were you but a dream....?
I cant find you try all I might
Il never give in
there will be no end to my fight

 
GORDONFREMAN  posted on Jun 16, 2008 3:56:18 PM - Report post


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quote:
originally posted by Dancer087

quote:
originally posted by GORDONFREMAN

ساقیا بده جامی زان شراب روحانی
تا دمی براساییم زین حجاب ظلمانی
طره ی پریشانش دیدم به دل گفتم
این همه پریشانی بز سر پریشانی
بی وفا نگار من میکند به کار من
خنده های زیر لب عشوه های پنهانی
دین ودل به یک دیدن باختیم خرسندیم
در قمار عشق ای دل کی بود پشیمانی؟
خانه ی دل ما را از کرم غمارت کن
پیش از این که این خانه رو نهد به ویرانی
ما سیه گلیمان را جز بلا نمیشاید
بر دل بهایی نه.هر بلا که بتوانی

it is a very cute persian poem said by sheikhe bahayee.

oh, i dont want to be 'that guy'

but for future reference would you mind posting in English only,
seeing as this is an English website.

merci

hey i want to defend from persian.

 
Serivor  posted on Jun 16, 2008 3:56:24 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Elite

Seeing how no one will post in my blog heres why I did.

An endless void of despair
I thought I would forever drift endlessly
Then I gazed into your eyes
I knew then where my destiny lies
For your beauty shall hold me till the end of time
Entranced by you I felt the world melt away and then we were all but one
Then as I dared to close my eyes
I saw that you were gone
Then the shadows swept upon me
The world was so dark with out your light
Were you but a dream....?
I cant find you try all I might
Il never give in
there will be no end to my fight

This is a good write minus some grammatical errors.

 
Elite  posted on Jun 16, 2008 4:02:46 PM - Report post

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Erm could you point these errors out cause neither my eyes or my spell checker could find error unless me and my spell checker are both going insane.
 
Spartan-112  posted on Jun 16, 2008 4:17:31 PM - Report post


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I don't really like poetry but I would love to hear what you have.
 
Serivor  posted on Jun 16, 2008 4:21:31 PM - Report post

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An endless void of despair
I thought I would forever drift endlessly
Then I gazed into your eyes
I knew then where my destiny lies
For your beauty shall hold me till the end of time
Entranced by you I felt the world melt away and then we were all but one
Then as I dared to close my eyes
I saw that you were gone
Then the shadows swept upon me
The world was so dark with out your light *without is one word
Were you but a dream....?
--->I cant find you try all I might<----- * this whole sentence
Il never give in * you forgot the i
there will be no end to my fight
 
Spartan-112  posted on Jun 16, 2008 4:26:19 PM - Report post


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Do you write poetry alot? You have some really good poems!
 
Elite  posted on Jun 16, 2008 4:30:14 PM - Report post

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That one was mine
Oh yeah and I just got grammar nazified
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