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I'm not that into poetry. It'd have to be hilarious to keep me moderately entertained.

Limerick I made just now:

Welcome to the CHU forum!
Where no one will invade your rectum!
We browse by day,
With little dismay,
Nothing bloody ends in "um"!

forum and rectum don't even rhyme that well... sounds kinda weird to me.

[Edited by SuperSaiyan4, 4/12/2008 9:05:18 PM]

thanx for liking my poem kai whatever,lol. i hope yours ends up good to. i'm sure she'll like it either way,haha.

@ssj4....nice poem >.>

This feeling overwhelms me,
a swelling of the heart.
I never thought I could be happy,
this happy from the start.

Take me by the hand,
lead me by the heart.
I'm flying, will I land?
Will this feeling fall apart?

With you I let go,
of intuition and sound mind.
My feelings I can't help but show,
to a person who is so kind.

Kiss my lips so tender,
embrace me through the night.
To you I will surrender,
so you better hold on tight.

So strongly you hold my hand,
our fingers intertwine.
I hope you understand,
that forever you are mine.



I wrote that for Serivor, a.k.a my boyfriend. No title, just thought I'd put it out there.

aww baby. that's such a good poem. i honestly didn't know you could write like that. =]]
and it's for me.

i didnt really like it.

its lovely because its about your boyfriend

but in terms of poetry, its a no.

Lets see you do better then.

i think it's actual pretty good even if it wasn't about me i would still have the same opinion.

here's a poem I wrote tell me what you think

Let blood be thou water
and bones be thy bread
The dark knights are coming to fill thee with dread
so take up hou arms and fight with will
fore thou only fight for the joy of the Kill!