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Poetry.
 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:36:16 PM - Report post


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well i got worked up because you tried to force it as a fact. no one is wrong in an opinion. so your logic is wrong. plus calling me mr brainwash doesn't exactly help.

i found the lord on my own terms, no brainwashed

the story behind the poem has to do with my mom being on drugs and me losing my house and everything, but i gave it to the lord and it all worked out.

i posted it my blog b/c i wanted to...

how did it work out?
sorry about your mum that must have been a difficult time.

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:41:10 PM - Report post

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well you see i started praying and it kind of went step by step.
she left to get help
she came back clean
she got a job
she got a car
and right now we're working on getting a house
i currently stay with a friend

but the reason i believe God did it is because i didnt really believe in him prior to the praying and ever since my life has been great...so thats why

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:47:34 PM - Report post


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well you see i started praying and it kind of went step by step.
she left to get help
she came back clean
she got a job
she got a car
and right now we're working on getting a house
i currently stay with a friend

but the reason i believe God did it is because i didnt really believe in him prior to the praying and ever since my life has been great...so thats why

i would worship your mum, not 'god'
looks like your mum has done amazing for herself.
unless god (by definition) can control free will,(upon which he can not) it looks like your mum left to get help, came back clean, got a job, got a car and is working on getting a house.
in summary i would say that your mum has made your life great.
not god.

but if thinking there is a god provides you with some sort of crutch then who am i to tell you otherwise.

 
jane29  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:53:28 PM - Report post

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i made 2 blogs of my poems
there prety old...here they are


the world is their stage
I wake up
Get out of bed
And prepare myself for another day of lies

I finish my breakfast
And am off to school
First period, history class
Ohhhh the WORST
The wars, the government, Vietnam, the UN, 9/11
What am I suppose to believe?

Like confused rats in an experiment,
They watch and control our lives
A population too naïve to see the truculent, tricky tactics

But the media is their weapon
Murders the mind of the society
No questions asked?
No “how”, or “why”, or “when”, or “where”?

I go home and turn on the news channel-
Terrorists, murder, fifty, a hundred, suicide, bomb
War on terror. WAR ON TERROR?

Oh yes, but we want another Vietnam.

Like fire we are
With passion, heat, and strength,
But we are a weak, thick, smokeless, silent fire
We let them feed us with garbage

Today we sit in silence
Its all about our clothes, our looks, our cars
The puppeteers are very good at their work
They control every move, every step
And it all looks so real
As If the puppet is in control of itself

Heck, it’s not surprising they’ve already created the chip

Wow, friendly fire in Afghanistan?
Another roadside bombing in Iraq?
Ohhhh, look it’s 8’o’clock
Time to watch ER

 
jane29  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:55:41 PM - Report post

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heres the other one

deepest blue
No one can hear the things I whisper
No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
Don’t ever leave me please I need you
The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

Can I touch you to see if you’re real
I’ve never seen anything like you
Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
You are the stars on my horizon
And you are always where I need you to be

Please don’t look at me in the eye
A gaze that makes me melt
Like the Earth in need for its sun
that’s how you’ve always made me felt

So stay with me forever
I don’t want to ever lose you
Because if you leave me now
I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:58:53 PM - Report post


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heres the other one

deepest blue
No one can hear the things I whisper
No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
Don’t ever leave me please I need you
The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

Can I touch you to see if you’re real
I’ve never seen anything like you
Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
You are the stars on my horizon
And you are always where I need you to be

Please don’t look at me in the eye
A gaze that makes me melt
Like the Earth in need for its sun
that’s how you’ve always made me felt

So stay with me forever
I don’t want to ever lose you
Because if you leave me now
I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue

they are both really really good lol
i am actually impressed and i am never impressed with anything.

you have just been added to my friend list

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 4:13:42 PM - Report post


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general creator takes a dive
relax and dig your nails into my arm
so qualitive reciever of air
please translate the following
it seems this evening
my hands defamiliarise themselves to me
as phantom limbs touch phantom things
the passage of time becomes ever more
mechanical like the ticking of a watch
or a rude awakening from de-evolution
indulgent within pre-emptive happiness
and wearing a bright paper hat
reacting to the family a room of strangers
binded by obligation and biology
taking one deep breathe at a time
as the company wont colour me
i surrender to the surrounding primary
my over-confident pearly whites
as i slowly edge index to oesophagus
beauty so i am told, is knuckle deep
conclusive to the episodes regime
i wish to finish with a closing statement
aliens definately exist.
 
jane29  posted on Apr 05, 2008 4:20:48 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by jane29

heres the other one

deepest blue
No one can hear the things I whisper
No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
Don’t ever leave me please I need you
The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

Can I touch you to see if you’re real
I’ve never seen anything like you
Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
You are the stars on my horizon
And you are always where I need you to be

Please don’t look at me in the eye
A gaze that makes me melt
Like the Earth in need for its sun
that’s how you’ve always made me felt

So stay with me forever
I don’t want to ever lose you
Because if you leave me now
I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue

they are both really really good lol
i am actually impressed and i am never impressed with anything.

you have just been added to my friend list

thankss
but there pretty old

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