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    Dancer posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:36:16 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    well i got worked up because you tried to force it as a fact. no one is wrong in an opinion. so your logic is wrong. plus calling me mr brainwash doesn't exactly help.

    i found the lord on my own terms, no brainwashed

    the story behind the poem has to do with my mom being on drugs and me losing my house and everything, but i gave it to the lord and it all worked out.

    i posted it my blog b/c i wanted to...

    how did it work out?
    sorry about your mum that must have been a difficult time.

     
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    Serivor posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:41:10 PM - Report post
     
    well you see i started praying and it kind of went step by step.
    she left to get help
    she came back clean
    she got a job
    she got a car
    and right now we're working on getting a house
    i currently stay with a friend

    but the reason i believe God did it is because i didnt really believe in him prior to the praying and ever since my life has been great...so thats why
     
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    Dancer posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:47:34 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    well you see i started praying and it kind of went step by step.
    she left to get help
    she came back clean
    she got a job
    she got a car
    and right now we're working on getting a house
    i currently stay with a friend

    but the reason i believe God did it is because i didnt really believe in him prior to the praying and ever since my life has been great...so thats why

    i would worship your mum, not 'god'
    looks like your mum has done amazing for herself.
    unless god (by definition) can control free will,(upon which he can not) it looks like your mum left to get help, came back clean, got a job, got a car and is working on getting a house.
    in summary i would say that your mum has made your life great.
    not god.



    but if thinking there is a god provides you with some sort of crutch then who am i to tell you otherwise.

     
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    jane29 posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:53:28 PM - Report post
     
    i made 2 blogs of my poems
    there prety old...here they are


    the world is their stage
    I wake up
    Get out of bed
    And prepare myself for another day of lies

    I finish my breakfast
    And am off to school
    First period, history class
    Ohhhh the WORST
    The wars, the government, Vietnam, the UN, 9/11
    What am I suppose to believe?

    Like confused rats in an experiment,
    They watch and control our lives
    A population too naïve to see the truculent, tricky tactics

    But the media is their weapon
    Murders the mind of the society
    No questions asked?
    No “how”, or “why”, or “when”, or “where”?

    I go home and turn on the news channel-
    Terrorists, murder, fifty, a hundred, suicide, bomb
    War on terror. WAR ON TERROR?

    Oh yes, but we want another Vietnam.

    Like fire we are
    With passion, heat, and strength,
    But we are a weak, thick, smokeless, silent fire
    We let them feed us with garbage

    Today we sit in silence
    Its all about our clothes, our looks, our cars
    The puppeteers are very good at their work
    They control every move, every step
    And it all looks so real
    As If the puppet is in control of itself

    Heck, it’s not surprising they’ve already created the chip

    Wow, friendly fire in Afghanistan?
    Another roadside bombing in Iraq?
    Ohhhh, look it’s 8’o’clock
    Time to watch ER



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    jane29 posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:55:41 PM - Report post
     
    heres the other one

    deepest blue
    No one can hear the things I whisper
    No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
    Don’t ever leave me please I need you
    The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

    Can I touch you to see if you’re real
    I’ve never seen anything like you
    Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
    You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

    I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
    Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
    You are the stars on my horizon
    And you are always where I need you to be

    Please don’t look at me in the eye
    A gaze that makes me melt
    Like the Earth in need for its sun
    that’s how you’ve always made me felt

    So stay with me forever
    I don’t want to ever lose you
    Because if you leave me now
    I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue
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    Dancer posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:58:53 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by jane29

    heres the other one

    deepest blue
    No one can hear the things I whisper
    No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
    Don’t ever leave me please I need you
    The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

    Can I touch you to see if you’re real
    I’ve never seen anything like you
    Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
    You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

    I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
    Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
    You are the stars on my horizon
    And you are always where I need you to be

    Please don’t look at me in the eye
    A gaze that makes me melt
    Like the Earth in need for its sun
    that’s how you’ve always made me felt

    So stay with me forever
    I don’t want to ever lose you
    Because if you leave me now
    I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue

    they are both really really good lol
    i am actually impressed and i am never impressed with anything.

    you have just been added to my friend list

     
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    Dancer posted on Apr 05, 2008 4:13:42 PM - Report post
     
    general creator takes a dive
    relax and dig your nails into my arm
    so qualitive reciever of air
    please translate the following
    it seems this evening
    my hands defamiliarise themselves to me
    as phantom limbs touch phantom things
    the passage of time becomes ever more
    mechanical like the ticking of a watch
    or a rude awakening from de-evolution
    indulgent within pre-emptive happiness
    and wearing a bright paper hat
    reacting to the family a room of strangers
    binded by obligation and biology
    taking one deep breathe at a time
    as the company wont colour me
    i surrender to the surrounding primary
    my over-confident pearly whites
    as i slowly edge index to oesophagus
    beauty so i am told, is knuckle deep
    conclusive to the episodes regime
    i wish to finish with a closing statement
    aliens definately exist.
     
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    jane29 posted on Apr 05, 2008 4:20:48 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Dancer087

    quote:
    originally posted by jane29

    heres the other one

    deepest blue
    No one can hear the things I whisper
    No one but you can hear the sound of my soul
    Don’t ever leave me please I need you
    The arrow has hit me now, my heart you’ve stole

    Can I touch you to see if you’re real
    I’ve never seen anything like you
    Like I’m in a dream, that’s how I feel
    You’re my four leaf clover, my deepest blue

    I feel like I’m fading like a sunset
    Tumbling softly, slowly into the sea
    You are the stars on my horizon
    And you are always where I need you to be

    Please don’t look at me in the eye
    A gaze that makes me melt
    Like the Earth in need for its sun
    that’s how you’ve always made me felt

    So stay with me forever
    I don’t want to ever lose you
    Because if you leave me now
    I will lose my purpose, I will lose my deepest blue

    they are both really really good lol
    i am actually impressed and i am never impressed with anything.

    you have just been added to my friend list

    thankss
    but there pretty old

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