no offence but the one about god makes me think you are crazy.
thats the only one i have read.
kk will do.
well God isnt real, so its just kind of scary reading all that wierd devotion to something of fiction.
its like if i wrote a poem that was like.
harry potter my heart is safe within your embrace
and shield me with your magic against evil
as i know that my faith in you is strong
and i shall forever tend my days in thou name
devotion my armour and scar thine brow
cast love into hogwarts as i remain loyal
i love you harry with all that i am
i am not judging you because you were probably raised that way i suppose.
and i am aware that people may think i am wrong but please dont reply to this, the 'religion' debate is so boring, i was only making a passing point in regards to serivor's poetry.
also serivor, the god one, the structure is a little odd, there is no rhyming pattern then suddenly you introduce AABB then dont do it again?
but about the structure, it does have one. it's just not as clear. you see when i write i try and add different styles together to make my own
why are you getting so worked up?
if you think he is real then i am simply wrong in your opinion, do you get really angry when people get math problems wrong or get low marks on exams?
i am not angry at you for believing in god.
chill-out mr brainwash.
i didnt mean to upset you about it, you souldnt take it so seriously.
anyway, i see that you are trying to make it your own but its just odd, it is sort of incorrect according to poetic structure.
its good though, there is clearly alot of emotions behind it, any reason why? and why did you post it in your blog?
i found the lord on my own terms, no brainwashed
the story behind the poem has to do with my mom being on drugs and me losing my house and everything, but i gave it to the lord and it all worked out.
i posted it my blog b/c i wanted to...
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