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Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:00:15 PM - Report post


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i dont have that

i can usually write poetry all the time

every current state is palatable into writting in my opinion.

i hate poems about faux-pas, pseudo-emotion like:

cutting my darkness like a knife in the hand of my heart
you broke me down and i scream in the rain
and i wear my sorrow like a mask at a parade of parents
but nothing you can do can stop this pain.

despite how my poetry skills show, the topic and empty metaphors make me feel sick.

haha
nice

emo

lol your a bit of an emo

i bet you loved it a little bit

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:01:27 PM - Report post

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haha
i guess
but i didn't mean emotions like that.

have you read my 2 poems in my blog?

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:03:57 PM - Report post


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haha
i guess
but i didn't mean emotions like that.

have you read my 2 poems in my blog?

yeah

no offence but the one about god makes me think you are crazy.

thats the only one i have read.

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:05:20 PM - Report post

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and why is that?

ohh, and go to view more entries to see the other

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:12:53 PM - Report post


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and why is that?

ohh, and go to view more entries to see the other

kk will do.

well God isnt real, so its just kind of scary reading all that wierd devotion to something of fiction.

its like if i wrote a poem that was like.

harry potter my heart is safe within your embrace
and shield me with your magic against evil
as i know that my faith in you is strong
and i shall forever tend my days in thou name
devotion my armour and scar thine brow
cast love into hogwarts as i remain loyal
i love you harry with all that i am

i am not judging you because you were probably raised that way i suppose.

and i am aware that people may think i am wrong but please dont reply to this, the 'religion' debate is so boring, i was only making a passing point in regards to serivor's poetry.

also serivor, the god one, the structure is a little odd, there is no rhyming pattern then suddenly you introduce AABB then dont do it again?

how come?

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:20:43 PM - Report post

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alright...and i won't make any more comments on it other than the fact that you express it as an opinion. do not tell me that something isn't real. i never tried to tell you that he was,okay, and there was no reason for you to add that comment in there. i believe, and thaats the bottom line...dont try and force your words on me like their facts. did i tell you God was real and that you had to believe in him? nooo..


but about the structure, it does have one. it's just not as clear. you see when i write i try and add different styles together to make my own

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:28:26 PM - Report post


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alright...and i won't make any more comments on it other than the fact that you express it as an opinion. do not tell me that something isn't real. i never tried to tell you that he was,okay, and there was no reason for you to add that comment in there. i believe, and thaats the bottom line...dont try and force your words on me like their facts. did i tell you God was real and that you had to believe in him? nooo..


but about the structure, it does have one. it's just not as clear. you see when i write i try and add different styles together to make my own

why are you getting so worked up?

if you think he is real then i am simply wrong in your opinion, do you get really angry when people get math problems wrong or get low marks on exams?

i am not angry at you for believing in god.

chill-out mr brainwash.
i didnt mean to upset you about it, you souldnt take it so seriously.

anyway, i see that you are trying to make it your own but its just odd, it is sort of incorrect according to poetic structure.
its good though, there is clearly alot of emotions behind it, any reason why? and why did you post it in your blog?

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 05, 2008 3:34:18 PM - Report post

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well i got worked up because you tried to force it as a fact. no one is wrong in an opinion. so your logic is wrong. plus calling me mr brainwash doesn't exactly help.

i found the lord on my own terms, no brainwashed

the story behind the poem has to do with my mom being on drugs and me losing my house and everything, but i gave it to the lord and it all worked out.

i posted it my blog b/c i wanted to...

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