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    justinsxslut posted on Jun 07, 2008 11:43:52 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    @ kristen that was pretty good, i enjoyed it

    @ gds, yeah thats a pretty cool write too

    .. thanks.

    Complete and total adoration,
    My gift to you, my heart was yours.
    In ten weeks you shaped it,
    In one night you murdered it.
    Torn from my chest and laid at your feet,
    That first step you took was the worst.
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    Patr10t posted on Jun 07, 2008 3:10:24 PM - Report post
     
    If i can save someone from pain
    then i shall not live in vain
    until your tears have washed away
    i will live in vain

    the pain you suffer
    will not be forever
    because my vain
    is your pain
     
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    Serivor posted on Jun 07, 2008 5:56:30 PM - Report post
     
    A Little Note Containing A Lot of Love

    I just want to hold you in my arms till the earth turns to ash and the sky fades to black,
    till the end of time i want to hold you close,
    next to my heart....which keeps a steady beat,
    a beat that gets its rhythm from the happiness you bring me.

    [Edited by Serivor, 6/7/2008 5:57:25 PM]
     
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    justinsxslut posted on Jun 07, 2008 7:00:28 PM - Report post
     
    What Draws Us Back

    I once had a white room,
    although it wasn't white for long.
    Inside an empty house,
    with no one but myself.
    My head was empty as well.

    The sweet summer air filled us both,
    me and that one boy who just hurt me alittle more than a year ago.
    My mother thought he was a nice boy,
    but I was never that naive again.

    Oh I miss my empty room,
    and my empty life that was so so filled with summertime.
    And my big backyard,
    with my lonely tireswing.
    The ladder to the top of my roof,
    where I would sit and do most of my thinking.

    Friends would come and go,
    but my white room always stayed the same.

    Oh I miss you,
    my happy room.
    And I know you miss me too,
    because you are once again empty.
    Empty and without me.
    Complete and total adoration,
    My gift to you, my heart was yours.
    In ten weeks you shaped it,
    In one night you murdered it.
    Torn from my chest and laid at your feet,
    That first step you took was the worst.
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    assassincreed posted on Jun 08, 2008 2:43:46 AM - Report post
     
    FRIEND


    When my friend left me,
    i felt so depressed.
    When my friend left me,
    I felt so lonely.
    When my friend left me,
    I felt so sad.
    When my friend left me,
    I seemed incomplete.
    When my friend left me,
    I seemed so dull.
     
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    GORDONFREMAN posted on Jun 08, 2008 2:49:01 AM - Report post
     
    now my poetry:

    a b c d e f g h i j k l m n o p q r s t u v w x y z.

    heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeey


    read it with music.
     
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    assassincreed posted on Jun 08, 2008 3:01:20 AM - Report post
     
    read it.it is still too bad.
     
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    GORDONFREMAN posted on Jun 08, 2008 3:03:52 AM - Report post
     
    no you dont know how you should read it

    [Edited by GORDONFREMAN, 6/8/2008 3:04:25 AM]
     
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