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    AceMagic126 posted on Apr 29, 2008 2:23:42 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Dancer087

    Henry Vaughan (1622 – 1695)

    The Retreat

    Happy those early days! when I
    Shined in my angel infancy.
    Before I understood this place
    Appointed for my second race,
    Or taught my soul to fancy aught
    But a white, celestial thought;
    When yet I had not walked above
    A mile or two from my first love,
    And looking back at that short space,
    Could see a glimpse of His bright face;
    When on some gilded cloud or flower
    My gazing soul would dwell an hour,
    And in those weaker glories spy
    Some shadows of eternity;
    Before I taught my tongue to wound
    My conscience with a sinful sound,
    Or had the black art to dispense,
    A several sin to every sense,
    But felt through all this fleshly dress
    Bright shoots of everlastingness.
    O, how I long to travel back,
    And tread again that ancient track!
    That I might once more reach that plain
    Where first I left my glorious train,
    From whence th' enlightened spirit sees
    That shady city of palm trees.
    But ah! my soul with too much stay
    Is drunk, and staggers in the way.
    Some men a forward motion love;
    But I by backward steps would move,
    And when this dust falls to the urn,
    In that state I came, return.

    make notes.

    thats awsome dude

    I am a child of a Insomniac

    "Sleep, those little slices of death; Oh how I loathe them."

    "Scorching my seared heart with a pain, not hell shall make me fear again"

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    Elite posted on Apr 30, 2008 4:17:57 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by jane29

    quote:
    originally posted by Elite

    Heres a really stupid one I posted in someones blog while drunk (cookie for the one who knows where I posted it)

    Making a cake for Elite

    Why just today he made me a cake but got rather upset when I told him it was a lie.
    Cryed he did but still a lie the cake remains and we agreed the cake was not a pie. Through all that pain and turmoil he endured making that cake and claiming it could fly still outside it rains and still I am yet to discover why.
    So smashed that cake he did and the lie in which it holds Is it me or insane is he? thats the lie the cake witholds eating it is my destiny.

    dont ask <_<

    [Edited by Elite, 4/28/2008 5:09:34 PM]

    you've got to be kidding me
    may i know who made this?

    I Did look at Lamiles blog she made before her current one. Thats where I orignally posted it.

    Elite
    He's been here for so long yet he's only made himself known once with Eliteitude...after that...not much else.

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    lamile posted on Apr 30, 2008 6:50:01 PM - Report post
     
    Aha.
    I never noticed that.
    I was like "What?! When did you write that in my blog?"
    O.o
    And I'm not too sure how this topic has gone along, so I'll just answer Serivor's question.
    I don't really like poetry, but when I'm forced to write it, oh well.
    And I usually like reading funny poetry or ones that are just creative.
     
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    Elite posted on May 01, 2008 7:41:46 AM - Report post
     
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    No U!
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    He's been here for so long yet he's only made himself known once with Eliteitude...after that...not much else.

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    Serivor posted on May 01, 2008 4:34:44 PM - Report post
     
    this poem is pretty old. it's from actual personal experience when my mom started cocaine and we lost it all.

    Snow White

    The days you left me to be alone,
    without the comfort of a stable home.
    You traded you're life in for the pleasure of cocaine
    You lied to me when I asked,"Why have you you changed?"
    There was no reason for all the lies,
    I could sense "ADDICTION" in your blue eyes.

    You left me in solitude without a care
    all the times I needed you, you were never there
    You sold everything, just to get high
    Then we went homeless, without a way to get by.

    Finally, you left to get some help
    To end all the hurt you thought you felt
    The feeling without it, made you wanna go insane
    It was hard for you to be without your pleasurable cocaine.

    But you got over it and won the fight,
    Now you're no longer addicted to "Snow White"
     
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    Serivor posted on May 02, 2008 3:16:34 PM - Report post
     
    no more poets =/
     
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    AceMagic126 posted on May 02, 2008 4:07:05 PM - Report post
     
    well im making a new one but i dont anyone liked my old one so i may keep it to myself
    I am a child of a Insomniac

    "Sleep, those little slices of death; Oh how I loathe them."

    "Scorching my seared heart with a pain, not hell shall make me fear again"

    "I have great faith in fools; self-confidence, my friends call it."

    I know already I cant spell
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    Serivor posted on May 02, 2008 6:02:39 PM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Blink182

    well im making a new one but i dont anyone liked my old one so i may keep it to myself

    ah, dont be ashamed. i thought your old was fine.

     
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