This sentence consists the entire idea of my last paragraph of the essay.
My teachers not pleased with my essay. She wants it to be a persuasive, comparison and contrast. Not just a comparison and contrast. So now I've got to pick a side. Honestly, I can't decide. They've both got good and bad qualities and they happen to have the same amount of each. Playstation's got more memory, yet Xbox has better RAM. The list is endless. Ugh.
[Edited by Toastman, 4/7/2010 4:13:57 PM]
Well anyway, it's really hard comparing and contrasting these consoles... they're both powerful, they're both expensive, and they both have their own pros and cons. Why didn't your teacher ask for a Wii, btw? It's better for the kids, plus it's more physical than the PS3 or the Xbox360.
[Edited by onmosis36, 4/7/2010 5:56:25 PM]
The teacher probably already has a Wii. Also, the Wii being "physical" isn't really a good thing. It's not enough to actually make a difference in your health.