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Poetry.
 
Serivor  posted on Jun 15, 2008 4:11:43 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by potato_chips

*copies from blog*

Once could love, now no heart
Thrown away, and torn apart
Empty life, wanders around
Deep inside, no emotions resound
No hope, no feelings yet
Nothing until the sun set


I jotted it down the other day, I didnt really think about it

Yeah well it's still not half bad.

 
WAFFLES  posted on Jun 15, 2008 4:28:02 PM - Report post


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i have 1 4 u:
roses are red violets are blue i get sick just thinking of you
 
Greendaysuks136  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:24:33 PM - Report post

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Serivor told me to post this here, so I did.
Its my very first attempt at a poem (still don't have a name for it)

All I see anymore is black rain,
as though the night sky has been cut open
and now lies dead.
I can hear the silence so loud,
as if a quiet time bomb has gone off
inside my head.
When I see myself in the mirror,
I wonder what happened, where all the
happiness went.
Its as if I've died on the inside,
like life has gone and left
all my feelings spent.
My heart no longer pumps blood,
instead, ice and snow flow through me
like a never ending winter.
My sadness, pain, and suffering
are a stake that's been driven through me,
it started out as just a splinter.
Not much drives me anymore,
just a dark, bleak, empty
and lifeless fire.
I can feel it trying to grow,
trying to rekindle and survive,
trying to burn my broken desires.

 
TMH  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:26:52 PM - Report post

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How about the name as "Black and empty"
 
Greendaysuks136  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:31:47 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by tmh32293

How about the name as "Black and empty"

That would work.

 
Neo7  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:32:51 PM - Report post

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Poetry doesn't cut it for me. Song lyrics on the other hand...
 
Greendaysuks136  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:34:03 PM - Report post

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originally posted by Neo7

Poetry doesn't cut it for me. Song lyrics on the other hand...

I can't write songs. Someone today told me I should try to write a poem, so I did. I can remember alot of song lyrics though.

 
GORDONFREMAN  posted on Jun 15, 2008 11:34:20 PM - Report post


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زیبایی تو خواب مرا ریخت بهم
ارامش مرداب مرا ریخت بهم
زیبا تر از انی که تحمل بکنم
زیباییت اعصاب مرا ریخت بهم


lol.that was persian.

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