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    assassincreed posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:26:24 AM - Report post
     
    did u requested your self or n1ytro
     
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    Megatron7 posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:26:48 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Dancer087

    quote:
    originally posted by assassincreed

    write about moderators please ban me

    maybe later,


    this is my quick (very quick)
    version of the bus poem thing i requested.


    seek upon the yellow bold
    passage within the palm of man
    while we dig ourselves into blue
    and salute myself as a guest
    as my white translates the blur
    into certain familiarities
    increasing anticipation of old
    like materials fit on skin
    appears the lines of motion
    to be associated with noise
    of background conversation
    the glare upon horizon burns
    my shadow like a signature
    as my red curve then turns
    to show glee and pearly white.

    I Like This Your Quick One

     
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    Dancer posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:26:58 AM - Report post
     
    i quickly just whipped something up.

    in response to this

    **originally posted by assassincreed:

    write about moderators please ban me**

    here it is, its all in the name of harmless fun.





    king the debt alive assured
    to analyse the need to serve
    fail to steel upon shoulders
    and assasincreed is a 'nerd'
    pause the thought of doubt
    within the minds of clouds
    dwell on self-recognition as
    constructive criticism is allowed
    to wash ones hands of note
    slipping through grip like sand
    not agreeing with what i say
    isn't grounds for me getting banned.
    so to conclude the ruse of day
    and donate such thoughts to past
    it seems you are always angry
    and i think you should just relax.


     
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    N1YTR0 posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:32:27 AM - Report post
     
    Im off to the movies, just me and my ride,
    To meet some new girls, get one on the side. (Jks)
    I pull up to the car park, and make my way in,
    When i get to the counter, the guy has a grin.
    He laughed as he said, "the movie's began",
    I snatched my drink & popcorn, and that's when i ran.
    By the time i sat down, he thought it was funny,
    He knew damn well, that i wasted my money.
    I went to my car, in hope to go home,
    The thing wouldn't start, so i began to rome.
    I found a sheltered bus stop, brightened by light,
    As i though to myself, jesus what a crap night.
    The bus eventually came, i got in and sat down,
    Quite far up the back, on my way into town.
    The bus was fairly pack, with all sorts of folk,
    And when i got home, i was taken for a joke.
    The bus driver was fat, creepy and smelly,
    Im pretty damn sure, his ears were filled with jelly.
    As for public transport, i think next time i'll pass,
    To be quite honest, i'd rather a kick in the....
    If you don't live for something,
    You die for nothing.
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    assassincreed posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:36:21 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Dancer087

    i quickly just whipped something up.

    in response to this

    **originally posted by assassincreed:

    write about moderators please ban me**

    here it is, its all in the name of harmless fun.





    king the debt alive assured
    to analyse the need to serve
    fail to steel upon shoulders
    and assasincreed is a 'nerd'
    pause the thought of doubt
    within the minds of clouds
    dwell on self-recognition as
    constructive criticism is allowed
    to wash ones hands of note
    slipping through grip like sand
    not agreeing with what i say
    isn't grounds for me getting banned.
    so to conclude the ruse of day
    and donate such thoughts to past
    it seems you are always angry
    and i think you should just relax.


    quick version i like this.wish my typing speed was fast as u guys.

    and assasincreed is a 'nerd'

    is not.He is a very nice guy.

     
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    Serivor posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:36:45 AM - Report post
     
    The Preacher's Daughter's Hands Are Stained With My Blood

    ...in a little bit I will fall onto the altar with my crimson hands
    and tell you all what I've become,and how I'm no longer man
    I've metamorphosized into a creature that the mirror doesn't recognize
    And now that I'm going insane, I need someone to look into me and psychoanalyze

    I don't know what I've become
    Why are my hands bloody? What have I done?
    My teeth are stained red, and my hunger is growing
    I put my hands on my head, the pain is overflowing
    I feel the transformation beginning
    I feel the other side of me winning
    Soon 'WHO I AM' will disapear and the monster within will awaken
    I wish I knew why my life has been taken

    I fall to the ground and I feel the hurt whelling up inside
    A feeling so painful,I'd much rather die
    Then there she was,
    the one whom I gave all my love
    But something about her wasn't the same
    I don't know what it was, but I sensed some kind of change

    She bent down and gripped my throat
    My breath shortened and I started to choke
    She picked me up into the air,
    Her nails digging into me more than I could bare
    I felt the bones cracking in my steady breaking neck
    I can't believe she's doing this, I would never expect

    She screams at me, "This is for hurting me all the time!!!"
    Then she twists my neck and severs my spine
    She gazes at my lifeless body,
    then she throws it onto the floor
    Then she spreads her black wings,
    and flies out of the church's door
     
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    assassincreed posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:41:56 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    The Preacher's Daughter's Hands Are Stained With My Blood

    ...in a little bit I will fall onto the altar with my crimson hands
    and tell you all what I've become,and how I'm no longer man
    I've metamorphosized into a creature that the mirror doesn't recognize
    And now that I'm going insane, I need someone to look into me and psychoanalyze

    I don't know what I've become
    Why are my hands bloody? What have I done?
    My teeth are stained red, and my hunger is growing
    I put my hands on my head, the pain is overflowing
    I feel the transformation beginning
    I feel the other side of me winning
    Soon 'WHO I AM' will disapear and the monster within will awaken
    I wish I knew why my life has been taken

    I fall to the ground and I feel the hurt whelling up inside
    A feeling so painful,I'd much rather die
    Then there she was,
    the one whom I gave all my love
    But something about her wasn't the same
    I don't know what it was, but I sensed some kind of change

    She bent down and gripped my throat
    My breath shortened and I started to choke
    She picked me up into the air,
    Her nails digging into me more than I could bare
    I felt the bones cracking in my steady breaking neck
    I can't believe she's doing this, I would never expect

    She screams at me, "This is for hurting me all the time!!!"
    Then she twists my neck and severs my spine
    She gazes at my lifeless body,
    then she throws it onto the floor
    Then she spreads her black wings,
    and flies out of the church's door

    nice but what does this word means psychoanalyze

     
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    Serivor posted on Jun 08, 2008 9:44:18 AM - Report post
     
    observe my brain and my mental state of being.
     
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