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Serivor · 4/4/2008

hey, this is something i've kinda always wondered. who here in CHU likes poetry, whether it be just

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justinsxslut posted on May 10, 2008 12:34:37 PM - Report post

Mhmmm. Some people should post on here more because poetry is nothing short of amazing. unless t's badly written, that is.

@ serivor: no problemo

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Serivor posted on May 10, 2008 8:56:08 PM - Report post

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originally posted by justinsxslut

Mhmmm. Some people should post on here more because poetry is nothing short of amazing. unless t's badly written, that is.

@ serivor: no problemo

i'm currently in the process of writing my masterpiece,lol

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justinsxslut posted on May 11, 2008 11:44:55 AM - Report post

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originally posted by Serivor

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originally posted by justinsxslut

Mhmmm. Some people should post on here more because poetry is nothing short of amazing. unless t's badly written, that is.

@ serivor: no problemo

i'm currently in the process of writing my masterpiece,lol

yay! lol. well if my friends are harrasing you im sorry. lol. i was kind of mad before and she kinda stole your sn from my aim and i have nothing to do with it. but anyways... get to work.

Complete and total adoration,
My gift to you, my heart was yours.
In ten weeks you shaped it,
In one night you murdered it.
Torn from my chest and laid at your feet,
That first step you took was the worst.

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Serivor posted on May 11, 2008 3:00:42 PM - Report post

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originally posted by justinsxslut

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originally posted by Serivor

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originally posted by justinsxslut

Mhmmm. Some people should post on here more because poetry is nothing short of amazing. unless t's badly written, that is.

@ serivor: no problemo

i'm currently in the process of writing my masterpiece,lol

yay! lol. well if my friends are harrasing you im sorry. lol. i was kind of mad before and she kinda stole your sn from my aim and i have nothing to do with it. but anyways... get to work.

please leave me alone
i don't want to have to put up with you on here, already have to other places

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Dancer posted on May 11, 2008 3:17:46 PM - Report post

must everyone be subjected to your playground antics?

take it somewhere else. it is horribly boring.

+ every time i see a new post on this topic i get a little excited to see people have a go at writing poetry.

no deal

-10 points each.

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Elite posted on May 11, 2008 3:45:05 PM - Report post

You know considering the name of this topic is poems there really isn't a lot of poetry in this maybe I should just do another one about cake.

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Dancer posted on May 11, 2008 3:47:11 PM - Report post

erm, i just wrote this

its not really something i am proud of.
its a little empty and generic.

but i feel a little desperate to see some poetry in here.
i also tried to make it rhyme, which i dont like doing.

could the audience hold their breathe
so my words could match the beat
of all the mindless, smiling
paying customers slide from their seats
so baby burn as the summer churns
out hospital beds occupied until
the winter or until everyone is dead
and i am lonely like the light
from a lighthouse on the shore
it seems my only sign of life
is to make sure everyone is warned
not to venture close to me
salt be in your dreams
rocks divide up your bones
to be donated to the sea

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Serivor posted on May 11, 2008 5:07:20 PM - Report post

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originally posted by Dancer087

erm, i just wrote this

its not really something i am proud of.
its a little empty and generic.

but i feel a little desperate to see some poetry in here.
i also tried to make it rhyme, which i dont like doing.

could the audience hold their breathe
so my words could match the beat
of all the mindless, smiling
paying customers slide from their seats
so baby burn as the summer churns
out hospital beds occupied until
the winter or until everyone is dead
and i am lonely like the light
from a lighthouse on the shore
it seems my only sign of life
is to make sure everyone is warned
not to venture close to me
salt be in your dreams
rocks divide up your bones
to be donated to the sea

sorry everyone.

but anyways good poem dancer