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Greendaysuks136  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:07:47 PM - Report post

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I don't appreciate poetry the way some people do. It doesn't get to me like other things. Some lyrics, quotes, etc. touch me, but poetry just hasn't ever been able to do it for me.
 
Serivor  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:14:14 PM - Report post

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Trapped behind these bars, I grow sick and tired.
I miss where I once was, the place that i admired.
I've been here forever it seems, and it never seems to end.
They just took away my son, and my one and only friend.

The days in this cage are like years on the other side.
There's not enough room to run and no place to hide.
My roar sounds all throughout this park.
But even as beastly as I may seem, sadness fills my heart.

I wish I could return to the place I once called home.
And be with friends and family and never again be alone.

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:23:56 PM - Report post


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originally posted by Serivor

Trapped behind these bars, I grow sick and tired.
I miss where I once was, the place that i admired.
I've been here forever it seems, and it never seems to end.
They just took away my son, and my one and only friend.

The days in this cage are like years on the other side.
There's not enough room to run and no place to hide.
My roar sounds all throughout this park.
But even as beastly as I may seem, sadness fills my heart.

I wish I could return to the place I once called home.
And be with friends and family and never again be alone.

it was ok.

you have a habbit of spoonfeeding emotion though.
your poems are all quite black and white and dont really require any thought to understand. which is good if you like that sort of poem.

also, you always go for 'sadness'
as advice, sadness is the most boring emotion to hear about.

+10 points though, i was impressed.

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:27:22 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Dancer087

quote:
originally posted by Serivor

Trapped behind these bars, I grow sick and tired.
I miss where I once was, the place that i admired.
I've been here forever it seems, and it never seems to end.
They just took away my son, and my one and only friend.

The days in this cage are like years on the other side.
There's not enough room to run and no place to hide.
My roar sounds all throughout this park.
But even as beastly as I may seem, sadness fills my heart.

I wish I could return to the place I once called home.
And be with friends and family and never again be alone.

it was ok.

you have a habbit of spoonfeeding emotion though.
your poems are all quite black and white and dont really require any thought to understand. which is good if you like that sort of poem.

also, you always go for 'sadness'
as advice, sadness is the most boring emotion to hear about.

+10 points though, i was impressed.

haha.
yeah I know.

but thanks...i guess -_-

 
Greendaysuks136  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:29:10 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Dancer087

quote:
originally posted by Serivor

Trapped behind these bars, I grow sick and tired.
I miss where I once was, the place that i admired.
I've been here forever it seems, and it never seems to end.
They just took away my son, and my one and only friend.

The days in this cage are like years on the other side.
There's not enough room to run and no place to hide.
My roar sounds all throughout this park.
But even as beastly as I may seem, sadness fills my heart.

I wish I could return to the place I once called home.
And be with friends and family and never again be alone.

it was ok.

you have a habbit of spoonfeeding emotion though.
your poems are all quite black and white and dont really require any thought to understand. which is good if you like that sort of poem.

also, you always go for 'sadness'
as advice, sadness is the most boring emotion to hear about.

+10 points though, i was impressed.

I thought the poem was nice. Its one of the better ones I've heard. And sadness isn't a boring emotion. Its actually alot more interesting than most emotions. Happiness is a boring emotion.

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:32:23 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Greendaysuks136

quote:
originally posted by Dancer087

quote:
originally posted by Serivor

Trapped behind these bars, I grow sick and tired.
I miss where I once was, the place that i admired.
I've been here forever it seems, and it never seems to end.
They just took away my son, and my one and only friend.

The days in this cage are like years on the other side.
There's not enough room to run and no place to hide.
My roar sounds all throughout this park.
But even as beastly as I may seem, sadness fills my heart.

I wish I could return to the place I once called home.
And be with friends and family and never again be alone.

it was ok.

you have a habbit of spoonfeeding emotion though.
your poems are all quite black and white and dont really require any thought to understand. which is good if you like that sort of poem.

also, you always go for 'sadness'
as advice, sadness is the most boring emotion to hear about.

+10 points though, i was impressed.

I thought the poem was nice. Its one of the better ones I've heard. And sadness isn't a boring emotion. Its actually alot more interesting than most emotions. Happiness is a boring emotion.

YAY! thanks

nothing like the mixed reviews of poetry,haha

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:35:36 PM - Report post


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originally posted by Greendaysuks136

I don't appreciate poetry the way some people do. It doesn't get to me like other things. Some lyrics, quotes, etc. touch me, but poetry just hasn't ever been able to do it for me.

sadly, the good review came from the person who said this.

 
Serivor  posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:38:35 PM - Report post

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originally posted by Dancer087

quote:
originally posted by Greendaysuks136

I don't appreciate poetry the way some people do. It doesn't get to me like other things. Some lyrics, quotes, etc. touch me, but poetry just hasn't ever been able to do it for me.

sadly, the good review came from the person who said this.

haha, yeah but that means i made someone who doesnt like poetry like my poetry. think about it,lol

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