dont worry elite i read your previous poems and i thought they are lovely.
put all these poem noobs to shame
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Poem not poems lol I only did one
dont worry elite i read your previous poems and i thought they are lovely.
put all these poem noobs to shame
*
i'm no poetry n00b boy!
haha, i found like the third poem i've ever wrote just now
dont worry elite i read your previous poems and i thought they are lovely.
put all these poem noobs to shame
*
Poem not poems lol I only did one
oh...erm
well i think because i read it over and over again and found so many interpritations i thought there was more than one....
i know some people have already read this one on my blog, but here it is.
When Time is No More
If only I could hold you forever,
till the end of time, embrace our love.
But yet I know this could never be,
for eternity isn't known.
It seems like a curse,
to know that we cannot be for all of time.
I wonder, does it all just end like it never was?
Or is there more to only what we see?
Maybe there is more to this love,
maybe it shapes our lives,
and maybe it prepares us for what is beyond.
Whatever it may be, I'm happy for what time that is spent with you.
And even though our love may end when we depart,
at least it gave me all the more reason to live for.
if i give you a topic, could you write a poem about it?
i know some people have already read this one on my blog, but here it is.
When Time is No More
If only I could hold you forever,
till the end of time, embrace our love.
But yet I know this could never be,
for eternity isn't known.
It seems like a curse,
to know that we cannot be for all of time.
I wonder, does it all just end like it never was?
Or is there more to only what we see?
Maybe there is more to this love,
maybe it shapes our lives,
and maybe it prepares us for what is beyond.
Whatever it may be, I'm happy for what time that is spent with you.
And even though our love may end when we depart,
at least it gave me all the more reason to live for.
if i give you a topic, could you write a poem about it?
i could, but i enjoy writing what I feel on a matter
EDIT: like personal matters about something
[Edited by Serivor, 4/27/2008 12:03:28 PM]
i know some people have already read this one on my blog, but here it is.
When Time is No More
If only I could hold you forever,
till the end of time, embrace our love.
But yet I know this could never be,
for eternity isn't known.
It seems like a curse,
to know that we cannot be for all of time.
I wonder, does it all just end like it never was?
Or is there more to only what we see?
Maybe there is more to this love,
maybe it shapes our lives,
and maybe it prepares us for what is beyond.
Whatever it may be, I'm happy for what time that is spent with you.
And even though our love may end when we depart,
at least it gave me all the more reason to live for.
if i give you a topic, could you write a poem about it?
i could, but i enjoy writing what I feel on a matter
EDIT: like personal matters about something
[Edited by Serivor, 4/27/2008 12:03:28 PM]
yeah everyone says that.
the topic is
''Being a lion in a zoo.''
DO ME PROUD
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