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    Dancer posted on Apr 21, 2008 4:58:01 PM - Report post
     
    i thought i sensed treachery afoot.

    i did quite like it though.

    if i was the sort of person who gave out things like
    'kudos' or something, i would give you '2 kudos'

    the cold reality is that you sadly get no kudos
     
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    Serivor posted on Apr 21, 2008 5:21:12 PM - Report post
     
    kudos!!!
    that's what we're gonna do from now on,lol jk
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    Serivor posted on Apr 26, 2008 10:15:45 PM - Report post
     
    Forever Lost

    Forever lost,
    forever forgotten;
    everything I've ever known.
    Who I am, what I was, is all forever gone.

    The life I lead, all that was mine;
    is now forever lost within the sands of time.
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    AceMagic126 posted on Apr 27, 2008 12:18:48 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    Forever Lost

    Forever lost,
    forever forgotten;
    everything I've ever known.
    Who I am, what I was, is all forever gone.

    The life I lead, all that was mine;
    is now forever lost within the sands of time.

    did you make that? thats really good.i have wrote a coupel songs but none worth pouting on hear theres one i mite pout on hear but thats it.well see it kind of sucks so be nice im not in a band or anything

    I am a child of a Insomniac

    "Sleep, those little slices of death; Oh how I loathe them."

    "Scorching my seared heart with a pain, not hell shall make me fear again"

    "I have great faith in fools; self-confidence, my friends call it."

    I know already I cant spell
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    Dancer posted on Apr 27, 2008 6:19:54 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Blink182

    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    Forever Lost

    Forever lost,
    forever forgotten;
    everything I've ever known.
    Who I am, what I was, is all forever gone.

    The life I lead, all that was mine;
    is now forever lost within the sands of time.

    did you make that? thats really good.i have wrote a coupel songs but none worth pouting on hear theres one i mite pout on hear but thats it.well see it kind of sucks so be nice im not in a band or anything

    me?! be nice?!

    you dont have to be in a 'band' to write poetry.
    there is a differance between lyrics and poetry anyway.

     
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    Serivor posted on Apr 27, 2008 11:02:51 AM - Report post
     
    quote:
    originally posted by Dancer087

    quote:
    originally posted by Blink182

    quote:
    originally posted by Serivor

    Forever Lost

    Forever lost,
    forever forgotten;
    everything I've ever known.
    Who I am, what I was, is all forever gone.

    The life I lead, all that was mine;
    is now forever lost within the sands of time.

    did you make that? thats really good.i have wrote a coupel songs but none worth pouting on hear theres one i mite pout on hear but thats it.well see it kind of sucks so be nice im not in a band or anything

    me?! be nice?!

    you dont have to be in a 'band' to write poetry.
    there is a differance between lyrics and poetry anyway.

    haha..thanks blink
    and yeah that was a short poem, but i mean it could be made into a song. and i write lyrics too, but i think lyrics are better when you know how they flow

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    Elite posted on Apr 27, 2008 11:12:30 AM - Report post
     
    There was another poem topic in which I included one of my own id copy/paste it if I could find it.
    Elite
    He's been here for so long yet he's only made himself known once with Eliteitude...after that...not much else.

    Posted by Neo 19/1/10

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    Dancer posted on Apr 27, 2008 11:39:05 AM - Report post
     
    dont worry elite i read your previous poems and i thought they are lovely.

    put all these poem noobs to shame

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