one more thing before i get started here; if you're one of those people who hates rap and wants everyone to know about it, don't post your queries here, thats not what this topic is for and we simply don't care.

now then, ill just throw something together to get things started.

i sit back
in this cage
like an animal

consume me

strapped down
beat around
like a cannibal

abuse me

at this stage
so much rage
my heart's flammable

reduce me

buried deep
with my sin
break my mandible

entomb me

this regret
dont forget
im an animal

exhume me

So here we go
just another average joe
Tryin' to rap, man this **** is whack

Whatcha want an applause?
you looking stupid in your draws
pants around your ankles

Man you need a slap!
telling peoples you'z on crack
thinking you can rap

like i said this **** is whack
you gotta be outta your god damn skull
thinking I'm gonna take you back

The only thing I'ma do with you is take you to school
I'm gonna be making you drool

You got "god can only judge me"
tattooed on your back
The only reason for that
is we all think your a prat

now sit your white ass down
yeah, you've gotta right to frown

my swagga aint permissible,
just keep on original,
tight ass-swaying hips,
keep them boys on the tips,

baggy eyes, and drooling lips,
get them awake by my whips,
slu's cleaning their 2 bucks nails,
piercing their lips - before they exhale,

but i dont care what they say,
all i want is a good-ass pay
swaggerin' 12 hours a night,
small ****s the only thing that keeps my ***** tight,

been called 'MISS LOOSE'
but they just jealous of my firm round caboose,
getting them to buy me some sweet kush,
puff puff puff puff,
heads getting a rush

(thats all i got)
BUT THIS IS FOR ALL DEM SLU'S WHO DUNNO WHERE DER BOTAYY BE GOIN

[Edited by jane29, 8/20/2010 6:59:15 PM]

I can't even see my own heart that's leaving me
I can't feel anything! Can you tell the difference?

Losing all control of my body, there's no movement
I am drained each day with dismay as I am slipping away

I don't know a thing
what's happening around me
I am just myself
there's no trick in itself

Is this all a dream?
Am I blinded by its scheme?
All my words are sliced apart
It was useless from the start

I am done with feeling sad
Like an apple that's gone bad
Avoid anything that hurt
That's the lesson that I've learned

Come on try and give command
Then you'll see and understand
That my heart's no longer here
To be swayed by even tears

If I were to move again, everything will be in vain
Every aspect of my life will descend into the dark

Are there any hopes for me?
Is it possible to flee?
Do you think I can exist?
In a world such as this?

Can I tolerate the pain and the sadness that remains?
I don't even know myself, I am foolish to insist

Every step on my journey
Drains the energy in me
I don't even know why I..
Am so shy from everyone...

If someday, someone like me
has a chance to change, you'll see
I will make a better world, shimmering in white delight

[Edited by Neo7, 8/20/2010 10:04:10 PM]

[Edited by Neo7, 8/21/2010 10:33:10 AM]