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....poem...
 
LifeOfGaming  posted on Apr 17, 2010 4:49:58 PM - Report post

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wrapped up in darkness
surrounded by the chill
seen by the empress
who sits on a window sill.

no one knows what she does
in the midnight winter sky
they say she dances up there because
they see the stars dance in twine.

dressed up in emeralds
a beautiful sight to see
although she has no idea
her life is not so free.

[Edited by LifeOfGaming, 4/17/2010 4:52:58 PM]

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 17, 2010 4:58:45 PM - Report post

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I like the idea of making a poem about an "empress" or something but, I would like the poem to be more adventurous, abstract or clever.

Seems a bit lame.

 
LifeOfGaming  posted on Apr 17, 2010 4:59:48 PM - Report post

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*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.
 
Elite  posted on Apr 17, 2010 5:05:44 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by LifeOfGaming

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

 
Dancer  posted on Apr 17, 2010 5:06:24 PM - Report post

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Everyone seems to think that if they write down some kind of basic emotion or generic narrative that they have created songs.

Pain, suffering and death you say? What a unique selection of material for 14 year olds to write about. (sticky out tongue face or something)

 
LifeOfGaming  posted on Apr 17, 2010 5:09:53 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Dancer

Everyone seems to think that if they write down some kind of basic emotion or generic narrative that they have created songs.

Pain, suffering and death you say? What a unique selection of material for 14 year olds to write about. (sticky out tongue face or something)

13.

 
LifeOfGaming  posted on Apr 17, 2010 5:10:22 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by Elite

quote:
originally posted by LifeOfGaming

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

To some poeple... planbskater hates me...idk what for, he just does...

 
Elite  posted on Apr 17, 2010 5:14:16 PM - Report post

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quote:
originally posted by LifeOfGaming

quote:
originally posted by Elite

quote:
originally posted by LifeOfGaming

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

To some poeple... planbskater hates me...idk what for, he just does...

Because he sees his old self in you.

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