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Posted: Apr 17, 2010 4:49:58 PM - Report post  (0)  (0)       Post Reply  post reply  

wrapped up in darkness
surrounded by the chill
seen by the empress
who sits on a window sill.

no one knows what she does
in the midnight winter sky
they say she dances up there because
they see the stars dance in twine.

dressed up in emeralds
a beautiful sight to see
although she has no idea
her life is not so free.

[Edited by LifeOfGaming, 4/17/2010 4:52:58 PM]

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Kanojo wa tochi no ma de chinmoku no naka de kanojo no ken o ageta no yo ni kuroi bara ga kiri no bokuso-chi ni ochita.

The black roses fell upon the misty meadows as she raised her sword in silence across the land.
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Posted: Apr 17, 2010 4:58:45 PM - Report post  (0)  (0)       Post Reply  post reply  

I like the idea of making a poem about an "empress" or something but, I would like the poem to be more adventurous, abstract or clever.

Seems a bit lame.

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Posted: Apr 17, 2010 4:59:48 PM - Report post  (0)  (0)       Post Reply  post reply  

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.
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Kanojo wa tochi no ma de chinmoku no naka de kanojo no ken o ageta no yo ni kuroi bara ga kiri no bokuso-chi ni ochita.

The black roses fell upon the misty meadows as she raised her sword in silence across the land.
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 quote:
 originally posted by LifeOfGaming:

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

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Everyone seems to think that if they write down some kind of basic emotion or generic narrative that they have created songs.

Pain, suffering and death you say? What a unique selection of material for 14 year olds to write about. (sticky out tongue face or something)

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Everyone seems to think that if they write down some kind of basic emotion or generic narrative that they have created songs.

Pain, suffering and death you say? What a unique selection of material for 14 year olds to write about. (sticky out tongue face or something)

13.

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Kanojo wa tochi no ma de chinmoku no naka de kanojo no ken o ageta no yo ni kuroi bara ga kiri no bokuso-chi ni ochita.

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 quote:
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 quote:
 originally posted by LifeOfGaming:

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

To some poeple... planbskater hates me...idk what for, he just does...

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Kanojo wa tochi no ma de chinmoku no naka de kanojo no ken o ageta no yo ni kuroi bara ga kiri no bokuso-chi ni ochita.

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 quote:
 originally posted by LifeOfGaming:

 quote:
 originally posted by Elite:

 quote:
 originally posted by LifeOfGaming:

*shrugs* i really don't care. Most of my 'poems' are songs i wrote. which are mostly about pain and suffering and death.

Then you must be an immensely cool dude

To some poeple... planbskater hates me...idk what for, he just does...

Because he sees his old self in you.

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Posted by Neo 19/1/10

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