oh...and they need to pick the correct shade of lip gloss. "
I found 2 grammar mistakes, how many can you find?
"I know girl's who wake up at 4:30 to take a shower, now dry hair, flatten hair to their face, eat food...then throw it up, AND where 10 pounds of make up and pick out clothes that are skin tight.
oh...and they need to pick the correct shade of lip gloss."
I found five.
[Edited by yosup, 2/17/2009 7:21:57 AM]
The apostrophe in girls, the now dry instead of then dry their, wear, and the oh should start with a capital.
Sorry about that Jane.
I could never date a girl in the knowledge that she'd go to the bathroom to vomit the $100 dinner I bought her.
Hypothetically speaking, of course. >_>
Oh...And they need to pick the correct shade of lip gloss. "
And Res, here's a tip: If you're with a bulimic girl, bring her to MacDonalds, get her a meal there to make her feel even more horrible about herself so she'll puke out more and look hotter. Ultimate eating disorder win.
[Edited by Petray, 2/17/2009 10:00:37 AM]