Hey Chingy the trailer was pretty cool, good choice of music. The script could use a bit of work though, "I can only dread....and imagine....and fear..." for instance, one of those three would be enough to make it sound good . Might wanna get a few more mates in to play different voices too, but other than that, good job
Hey Chingy the trailer was pretty cool, good choice of music. The script could use a bit of work though, "I can only dread....and imagine....and fear..." for instance, one of those three would be enough to make it sound good . Might wanna get a few more mates in to play different voices too, but other than that, good job
Always a fan of constructive criticism, thanks.
It's worth mentioning that the "speech" clips will make more sense after the actual machinima is released. It's not part of the main storyline, more of a spin-off than anything else. But the clips you saw (running, shooting, sniper etc) are taken straight off the main thing.
but you did seem to be losing your patience toward the end though, and of all people forty-two kept getting into skirmishes with insom while we were trying to film lol
no attention span FTW
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I'm pretty excited for it myself. Though I really haven't been around much to comprehend completely.
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. Might wanna get a few more mates in to play different voices too, but other than that, good job 
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